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M.E. Proctor's avatar

I love this....

Wendy Peppercorn's avatar

Always a fan! Great story! What does Punk Noir mean?

Punk Noir Magazine's avatar

It’s all explained on our website

Karen Glasser's avatar

I was just going to ask the same.

Lindsay Jones's avatar

Wonderful! So descriptive, I felt like I was right there as the scene was happening.

Offer Kuban's avatar

Love this, Carol. Feels there's an abundance of a tale, either leading up to or following this moment.

Some of it's True.'s avatar

Nightmare! I've seen this happen in supermarkets.

Carol White's avatar

Thank you everyone! It's my first Punk Noir story. Still getting the hang of it!