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M.E. Proctor's avatar

This is a fantastic story by Carlotta!

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Parker McCoy's avatar

Very nice film noir tale. I love the last line about how the rain stopped. Hehe. After hanging out with a lady with a hole in her head, he focuses on the weather. Perfect.

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Todd Anderson's avatar

Loved this! A creepy, noir tale that's fun to read.

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Vince Roman's avatar

Really enjoyed this one thanks for posting

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